Thursday, 11 May 2017

Title-The greedy gold keeper

Orientation

WHO- Farmer,Goose

WHEN- Years ago

WHERE- In a farm

Problem- One day there was a farmer going to his goose’s nest and saw a big heavy yellow egg.

Events- The Farmer was going to throw it away because he thought someone was playing a prank on him.

Then when the Farmer took the egg he took a look at it it and couldn’t believe his eyes it was a golden egg.

The next day he saw another golden egg. He knew it was going to make him very,very rich so he took the golden egg and went to sell the golden egg.

Everyday he went to the goose to go and get golden eggs. As the farmer grew richer he wanted more golden eggs so he killed the goose.

Resolution- But actually there were no golden eggs he went back to being poor.

Ending- The farmer would get no more gold and he was very sad. He killed the goose because he was to greedy.

Friday, 5 May 2017

Measurement and Geometry Vocabulary

Blogging Template

Title

Measurement,Geometry Vocabulary

Learning Intention

LI:To learn the vocabulary of geometry and measurement.

What did you learn?

I learned that shapes can be measured by different ways.

How did you learn?

I went to different sites to find the meaning of the word.

Embedded Digital Learning Object

Labels

Choose the subject:

Maths

number bonds, times tables, fractions, addition, subtraction

Story Web

Title-Poor Shot

Poor to Great shots

Orientation

WHO?-William-Old man-King-Brothers

WHEN? -At the day times

WHERE?-At the castle

Problem?-William was a boy that never liked going hunting because every time he shoot the bow and arrows William misses the target his brothers laugh at him for not shooting the targets. Then there dad the King wanted to go hunting and his sons including William.

Events!-Before they went hunting William went out in the woods practising shooting.While William was shooting a old man came.

The old man was watching William miss his targets again and again.

William looked at the old man and he looked very cold and hungry so William gave him some food and his warm coat.

Then the old man owed him back a stone. He said “As long as the stone is in your pocket you you will hit the target”.

Resolution-William appreciated him and went back to the castle but William forgot all about the stone.

Ending- After that William had to go hunting with his dad and brothers. When he shot the target he couldn’t believe his eyes arrow was on the target. Later that happened he felt the stone in his pocket and knew that it was magical.

LI:To Identify the parts of a narrative.

What I learned was that narrative's are a made up story and doesn't need to have a fake setting or a fake character.
How I learned to write was before I write we do our plan and like our Orientation,Events,Problem and Resolution.

Thursday, 13 April 2017

Goldilocks and The Three Bears

Introduction On a fine spring morning there were 3 bears. There is Daddy bear,Mama bear and Baby bear. Mama bear made her honeybunny porridge and it took so long to make it.Mama bear made it because she knew it was baby bear’s favourite. But Papa and baby baby bear spat it out and said “It’s too hot”. Baby bear then suggested “ Let’s go to the Rainbow Waterfall while the porridge cools down”. They packed up and got ready to leave. Then they went to chill out at the Rainbow waterfall. The three bears went to Rainbow Waterfall at 10:30. When the three bears entered the forest there were some mosquitoes chasing the bears they were running and running. While they were running from the mosquitoes they went to the rainbow waterfall. They jumped in the waterfall and the three bears were lucky because the mosquitoes didn’t want their tiny wings wet, so the mosquitoes went back home. After the mosquitoes went away the bears went back to their cottage. When they got back to their cottage the door was left open daddy bear looked very hungry and wanted to eat his porridge straight away. Baby bear also wanted to as well but, when Daddy and baby bear went inside the two of them were shocked that their porridge was eaten all up and he shouted with anger ” Who ate my porridge!” Mama bear looked at her bowl with a horrid mean face and she looked at her porridge and she screamed “Who ate my porridge, that porridge took so long to cook! ”. After that the last person of the family baby bear looked at his bowl with a sad, depressed face and said sadly “ Someone ate my porridge and they munched it all up ”. So they went to the living room to check if there was anything fishy going on. When they went to the living room they saw that the whole room was a mess daddy bear shouted with a mad face“ Someone sat on my chair and it is a mess it smells like fish that got thrown on the wall seven times!” Mama bear looked at her chair and said terribly “Someone sat on my chair and, it has a mark on it that smells like a shark that just got ambushed !?” Baby bear looked at broken pieces of his chair and he fell down on the floor and said sadly “Someone sat on my chair and my little chair broke and there's a smell of a poop water too?” So the three bears went upstairs to check on the bedroom to see if there was a mysterious troll or monster whatever thing that was doing all this mess. After the three bears went upstairs to the bedroom they heard someone snoring in their bedroom daddy bear looks at his bed and it was messy as a pigsty. Mama bear looked at her bed and it looked like there was a party of ants and was shocked also its blood was spread out, then baby bear checked his one and said someone's been sleeping on my one and they're still here. Baby bear went to Mama bear and said what is that thing with fuzzy fur on its head. Baby bear asked “Why is it two legged and skinny? Then daddy bear stood up and said they are called Humans. They can nearly do everything. There was a boy and a girl. The girl was blond and the boy was brown they both looked like brother and sister. The brownie boy suddenly opened his eyes and slapped the blonde and she opened her eyes and whispered” Do you think it’s these bears cottage” and brownie boy replied “You think!” then they got up slowly and Blonde shouted “ GO AND RUN!” Papa and Mama bear were chasing them and they got so tired that they couldn’t run anymore so they yelled and shouted “NEVER COME BACK OR ELSE!”. After that Mama and Papa were having a conversation about the language they were speaking. It looked like he was going to say “ They’re probably speaking Human language” but Mama bear stole his idea. So then Baby bear said “ Let’s go inside eat cereal ” and so they did.