I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
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Friday, 16 March 2018
Personal Recount - Art Intensive Week
LI: to learn how to accurately use a range of simple, compound, and complex sentences
Today I was writing a personal recount about Art Intensive week and seeing or checking how much simple, compound, and complex sentences. I had to find three simple sentences. Three compound sentences, and three complex sentences.
A simple sentence really is simple.
You need a subject, verb, and a object.
For Example: Chris ran to the soccer pitch
Chris is the subject.
Ran is the verb.
Also the soccer pitch is the object.
A simple sentence also is just one idea.
A Compound sentence has two ideas.
A compound sentence needs a conjunction to connect the two ideas.
For Example: Chris ran to the soccer pitch but it was closed
The subject is Chris.
The verb is Ran.
The object was the soccer pitch, and the conjunction is But.
A conjunction is FANBOY and more.
For
And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
Next is a complex sentence. A complex sentence has a One idea and a incomplete on so 1 and a half.
A complex sentence has a conjunction as the start of the sentence, and has a comma (,) before another conjunction. But you still need a subject, verb, and a object.
Thursday, 22 February 2018
Bean Bag Game 5 Sentence Recount
Name: Chris
Title: Bean Bag Game
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On Monday the 19th of February, Mr Wong's writing group went outside to play activities in at the fields.
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The first thing we did was get into three groups of eight.
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After Mr Wong told us how to play and the rules of the game.
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We played two rounds of the Bean Bag game.
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It was really fun but the problem was it was too hot.
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LI: to learn how to make a quick recount
T: Title
R: Reveal
E: Events
E: Ending
We had the Title.
The a reveal so that was the 5 Ws,
Who
What
When
Where
Why
There was three events so what happened.
Then it was the ending, what we did for the ending was a personal reflection.
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