I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Friday 16 November 2018
Commenting
LI: to learn how to smartcomment This week I commented on Andrew blog - post, he had a good blurb. But he didn't have that much on his blog - post. I told him what he needed, and what he did good, so he could do the changes.
Good job for going out to someone's blog. Remember there are several reasons for going onto other people's blogs: to help people improve their work, to help ourselves improve our own work, and to learn new things we may not have considered. To do this, we need to read specific blog posts, think about them, and then comment. To this end, here are some questions for you to think about:
1) Which blog post did you read? 2) What was Andrew learning? 3) What did Andrew do well? 4) What have you learned from reading his blog post? 5) How have you judged Andrew's blurb? If he didn't have much on his blog post, as you said, then how could he have had a good blurb? 6) Will Andrew understand your feedback to him? 7) Have you really made a CyberSmart comment?
Hello Chris
ReplyDeleteGood job for going out to someone's blog. Remember there are several reasons for going onto other people's blogs: to help people improve their work, to help ourselves improve our own work, and to learn new things we may not have considered. To do this, we need to read specific blog posts, think about them, and then comment. To this end, here are some questions for you to think about:
1) Which blog post did you read?
2) What was Andrew learning?
3) What did Andrew do well?
4) What have you learned from reading his blog post?
5) How have you judged Andrew's blurb? If he didn't have much on his blog post, as you said, then how could he have had a good blurb?
6) Will Andrew understand your feedback to him?
7) Have you really made a CyberSmart comment?