Editing Recounts

LI: to revise and edit a recount
We used all our knowledge from the past few weeks and we wrote a recount. The recount we had to write was a Kiwi Can, Kiwi Sport, or Music recount. We then had to get in pairs and give each other our recount. Then we had to edit each others recount. When we've done that we had to check our own recount which was checked and edited, then see the changes that were made. The changed were all worth a specific amount of points

Points system.
1 point for every change/addition made
1 point if an adjective is added
1 point is an adverb is added
2 points if the title was reworked to be more interesting
2 points if the word said is changed to be more interesting
2 points if punctuation is added (Exclamation, Question mark, Ellipsis, speech marks)
5 points if the sentence has been developed using our strategy from 3 weeks ago
5 points if the changes makes TREE more visible
-2 points if a capital letter is used outside of beginning of a sentence and a persons name
-10 points if there is only Full stops and/or commas
-20 points if only adjectives have been added
-20 points if there is under 10 changes and/or the changes didn’t make sense