Wednesday 21 June 2017

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LI: to write a narrative and to buddy conference to start to editing and check writing.
What I learned was to buddy check a person’s narrative they wrote last week. Our story was about Jack and Jill awakening a monster in a swamp.
We had to check our partner's story of all the bad things or mistakes our partners made.



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