LI: to edit our writing using DRAFT
To continue our learning on poetry and abstract nouns we wrote another poem about the noun.
Our abstract noun was Perseverance, meaning dedication and have the determination to keep going forward. In our poem we used the 5 senses and figurative language to elevate our writing. After finishing our poem we used DRAFT to correct and fix our writing.
An abstract noun is an intangible object, most of the time it is like feelings such as Happiness and Envy.
DRAFT is a structure used to critique and fix texts. DRAFT stands for: Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, and Talk.
Kia Ora Chris
ReplyDeleteI read your blogpost about perseverance. Your poem has a very powerfull meaning. My favourite sense how you described taste.
Nice Job