Monday 7 January 2019

Chinese Poem

For this activity we had to write a poem about being in Beijing with all the bad air pollution. The air pollution in Beijing, China is so bad that the roads are closed, flights are cancelled, and more. The air pollution is also bringing big deadly effects. Approximately 1.1 million people died in 2017. 

Poem About Beijing Air Pollution:

Bad air spreading everywhere

Mask had to be on

Uncomfortable I swear

I was just sad

With the breezy cold air

5 comments:

  1. Hi Chris!
    I really like your poem that you wrote about the air pollution in Beijing, China. I also liked that you added a fact to go with you blurb. I think that you need to work on adding in what week your on so that people can keep track of your work.
    Keep the great work up Chris! - Florence

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  2. Hello Chris! Nice work on coming up with your creative poem. I enjoyed how you mentioned having to wear a mask from the air in the pollution. I like how you included extra information you found in your blurb. What would you do to help fix the pollution in Beijing? Keep it up!

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  3. Hi Chris,
    Great job on completing this activity! I liked how you described your feelings as well as the situation. I found it interesting that around 1.1 million people died from air pollution in 2017. Would you want to go to Beijing if you could?

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  4. Hello Chris,

    Well done for completing this task. I am glad to see you posting these SLJ activities. Did you enjoy finishing this activity? Why? I did this activity too. It was very fun to complete. Your Chinese poem is very interesting. I enjoyed reading every part of it. I liked it how you said bad air spreading everywhere, because that is very true.

    NICE:)

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  5. Hi Chris,
    Well done you are doing so good .I like your facts too. Your poem is very well writen! I hear you are from China?. Which part are you from though?. Anyways keep it up!

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